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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Martin Duke's QPACK comments (#4750)

afrind <notifications@github.com> Tue, 19 January 2021 23:35 UTC

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@afrind commented on this pull request.



> +first-out order.  Each QPACK decoder holds a dynamic table that is initially
 empty.  Entries are added by encoder instructions received on the encoder
-stream; see {{encoder-instructions}}.
+stream; see {{encoder-instructions}}.  The encoder tracks the contents of the
+dynamic table maintained by the decoder.

How about:

> The dynamic table consists of a list of field lines maintained in first-in, first-out order.  A QPACK encoder and decoder share a dynamic table that is initially empty. The encoder adds entries to the dynamic table and sends them to the decoder via instructions on the encoder stream; see {{encoder-instructions}}.   

I'm on the fence about adding another sentence about how the encoder tracks the decoder's current state via the decoder stream.

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