Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] First tranche of EKR's editorial pass, through 7.3.2 (#2087)

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rpaulo commented on this pull request.



> @@ -834,7 +835,7 @@ commitment.
 ## Controlling Concurrency {#controlling-concurrency}
 
 An endpoint limits the cumulative number of incoming streams a peer can open.
-Only steams with a stream id less than
+Only streams with a stream id less than

Capitalize ID while there?

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