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nits in draft-ietf-quic-recovery-05

Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com> Mon, 11 September 2017 06:17 UTC

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From: Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com>
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Subject: nits in draft-ietf-quic-recovery-05
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Hi,

In section 3.1 the bullet before the last one "a QUIC sender marks a packet as lost when a packet larger than it is acknowledged" should be "with higher packet number" instead of "larger"?



In section 3.2.7.4 "if (retransmittable_packets_outstanding = 1):"   should be "==" instead of "="?



Thanks

Roni

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