[Raw] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9450 (7637)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Sun, 10 September 2023 19:37 UTC

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9450,
"Reliable and Available Wireless (RAW) Use Cases".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7637

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com>

Section: 1

Original Text
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IEEE 802.11 has identified a set of real applications
[IEEE80211RTA], which may use the IEEE802.11 standards.  They
typically emphasize strict end-to-end delay requirements.

Corrected Text
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IEEE 802.11 has identified a set of real-time applications
[IEEE80211RTA], which may use the IEEE 802.11 standards.  They
typically emphasize strict end-to-end delay requirements.

Notes
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Given both the context and the title of the referenced document, "real-time" makes more sense here than "real".

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RFC9450 (draft-ietf-raw-use-cases-11)
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Title               : Reliable and Available Wireless (RAW) Use Cases
Publication Date    : August 2023
Author(s)           : CJ. Bernardos, Ed., G. Papadopoulos, P. Thubert, F. Theoleyre
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : Reliable and Available Wireless
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG