Re: [regext] 2nd WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance

Joseph Yee <jyee@afilias.info> Sun, 11 April 2021 16:25 UTC

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Date: Sun, 11 Apr 2021 12:25:07 -0400
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Subject: Re: [regext] 2nd WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance
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Hi Antoin and everyone,

I reviewed the -12 draft and support the publication.

Two (very) minor changes suggested:

(1)
Section 3.3
<maint:detail>
The OPTIONAL URI to detailed maintenance description.

It's clear what URI is, but should still need to reference it with the
according RFCs.

(2)
Section 5.1
The formal syntax for <maint:id> should include the attribute specification
for 'name' and 'lang'.

Best,
Joseph



On Mon, Mar 29, 2021 at 9:21 AM Antoin Verschuren <ietf@antoin.nl> wrote:

> Just to be clear, since this is a 2nd WGLC, the new WGLC is for
> draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12
>
>
>
> > Op 29 mrt. 2021, om 14:49 heeft Antoin Verschuren <ietf@antoin.nl> het
> volgende geschreven:
> >
> > The following working group document is believed to be ready for
> submission to the IESG for publication as a standards track document:
> >
> >
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance/
> >
> > EXTRA ATTENTION: This is the second WGLC for this document. During the
> first WGLC, there were still some substantial comments to be addressed, and
> there was not enough positive feedback to declare consensus on this
> document. Let’s do better this time and please take the time to review this
> document and indicate your support (a simple “+1” is sufficient) or
> concerns with the publication of this document by replying to this message
> on the list. Since we have 3 authors, we need more reviewers to state
> support!
> >
> > This WG last call will end at close of business, Monday, 12 April 2021.
> >
> >
> > The document shepherd for this document is James Galvin.
> >
> > Regards,
> >
> > Antoin and Jim
> >
> >
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