Re: [regext] 2nd WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance

[Joseph Yee <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tobias,

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On Mon, Apr 12, 2021 at 7:22 AM Tobias Sattler <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> Thanks, Joseph.
>
> Please see our comments inline.
>
> Tobias
>
> On 11. Apr 2021, at 18:25, Joseph Yee <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Hi Antoin and everyone,
>
> I reviewed the -12 draft and support the publication.
>
> Two (very) minor changes suggested:
>
> (1)
> Section 3.3
> <maint:detail>
> The OPTIONAL URI to detailed maintenance description.
>
> It's clear what URI is, but should still need to reference it with the
> according RFCs.
>
>
> TS: We will add the reference.
>
>
> (2)
> Section 5.1
> The formal syntax for <maint:id> should include the attribute
> specification for 'name' and 'lang'.
>
>
> TS: Can you please clarify that? We have “name” and “lang” for <maint:id>.
>
> <complexType name="infoType">
>        <sequence>
>          <choice>
>            <element name="list"/>
>            <element name="id" type="maint:idType"/>
>          </choice>
>        </sequence>
>      </complexType>
>      <!--
>      Human-readable text may describe the maintenance
>      -->
>      <complexType name="idType">
>        <simpleContent>
>          <extension base="token">
>            <attribute name="name" type="token"/>
>            <attribute name="lang" type="language" default="en"/>
>          </extension>
>        </simpleContent>
>      </complexType>
>
>
Yes, re-read the draft and it's there.  I missed it when I wrote my comment.

Thanks,
Joseph


> Best,
> Joseph
>
>
>
> On Mon, Mar 29, 2021 at 9:21 AM Antoin Verschuren <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
>> Just to be clear, since this is a 2nd WGLC, the new WGLC is for
>> draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12
>>
>>
>>
>> > Op 29 mrt. 2021, om 14:49 heeft Antoin Verschuren <[e-mail]> het
>> volgende geschreven:
>> >
>> > The following working group document is believed to be ready for
>> submission to the IESG for publication as a standards track document:
>> >
>> >
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance/
>> >
>> > EXTRA ATTENTION: This is the second WGLC for this document. During the
>> first WGLC, there were still some substantial comments to be addressed, and
>> there was not enough positive feedback to declare consensus on this
>> document. Let’s do better this time and please take the time to review this
>> document and indicate your support (a simple “+1” is sufficient) or
>> concerns with the publication of this document by replying to this message
>> on the list. Since we have 3 authors, we need more reviewers to state
>> support!
>> >
>> > This WG last call will end at close of business, Monday, 12 April 2021.
>> >
>> >
>> > The document shepherd for this document is James Galvin.
>> >
>> > Regards,
>> >
>> > Antoin and Jim
>> >
>> >
>> >
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