Re: [regext] 2nd WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance

Thanks, Joseph.

Please see our comments inline.

Tobias

> On 11. Apr 2021, at 18:25, Joseph Yee <jyee@afilias.info> wrote:
> 
> Hi Antoin and everyone,
> 
> I reviewed the -12 draft and support the publication.
> 
> Two (very) minor changes suggested:
> 
> (1)
> Section 3.3 
> <maint:detail>
> The OPTIONAL URI to detailed maintenance description.
> 
> It's clear what URI is, but should still need to reference it with the according RFCs.

TS: We will add the reference.

> 
> (2)
> Section 5.1
> The formal syntax for <maint:id> should include the attribute specification for 'name' and 'lang'.

TS: Can you please clarify that? We have “name” and “lang” for <maint:id>.

<complexType name="infoType">
       <sequence>
         <choice>
           <element name="list"/>
           <element name="id" type="maint:idType"/>
         </choice>
       </sequence>
     </complexType>
     <!--
     Human-readable text may describe the maintenance
     -->
     <complexType name="idType">
       <simpleContent>
         <extension base="token">
           <attribute name="name" type="token"/>
           <attribute name="lang" type="language" default="en"/>
         </extension>
       </simpleContent>
     </complexType>

> 
> Best,
> Joseph
> 
> 
> 
> On Mon, Mar 29, 2021 at 9:21 AM Antoin Verschuren <ietf@antoin.nl <mailto:ietf@antoin.nl>> wrote:
> Just to be clear, since this is a 2nd WGLC, the new WGLC is for draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12
> 
> 
> 
> > Op 29 mrt. 2021, om 14:49 heeft Antoin Verschuren <ietf@antoin.nl <mailto:ietf@antoin.nl>> het volgende geschreven:
> > 
> > The following working group document is believed to be ready for submission to the IESG for publication as a standards track document:
> > 
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance/>
> > 
> > EXTRA ATTENTION: This is the second WGLC for this document. During the first WGLC, there were still some substantial comments to be addressed, and there was not enough positive feedback to declare consensus on this document. Let’s do better this time and please take the time to review this document and indicate your support (a simple “+1” is sufficient) or concerns with the publication of this document by replying to this message on the list. Since we have 3 authors, we need more reviewers to state support!
> > 
> > This WG last call will end at close of business, Monday, 12 April 2021.
> > 
> > 
> > The document shepherd for this document is James Galvin.
> > 
> > Regards,
> > 
> > Antoin and Jim
> > 
> > 
> > 
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