Re: [regext] [Ext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-04.txt

["Hollenbeck, Scott" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the update, Gustavo. I think there are a few more minor edits to discuss. From Jim Gould's testing of the examples:

https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/Y2G2yHJppT1DSb8_TYp4uMo0T-s

" 6. Section 5.5.2.1.1 “idnLanguage CSV File Definition
a. Example needs to be updated to use <rdeCsv:csv name="idnLanguage" sep=","> and not include the <rdeCsv:sep>,</rdeCsv:sep> element "

" 7. Section 5.2.2.1.3 “hostAddresses” CSV File Definition
a. Change reference of hostAddressesObj-YYYYMMDD.csv to hostAddresses-YYYYMMDD.csv"

These are both still in the new document. Should they be?

One minor idnit:

"Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-02"

That's all I found in my follow-up.

Scott

> -----Original Message-----
> From: regext <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Gustavo Lozano
> Sent: Monday, December 16, 2019 7:44 PM
> To: [e-mail]
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] [Ext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-
> objects-mapping-04.txt
> 
> Hello,
> 
> Hello,
> 
> Version 04 of draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping addresses the
> feedback provided by Scott (thank you, great feedback) during document
> shepherd review:
> 
> 	https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/TjRlL9OygsrZ_BXjnJDs7
> UeHRJk
> 
> Regarding this suggestion:
> 
> The IANA Considerations section requests registration of multiple XML
> namespaces and XML schemas. For example, urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:rdeCsv-
> 1.0 and urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:rdeCsv-1.0. Recent convention has been
> to include “epp” in the URIS for EPP-associated namespaces and schemas,
> e.g. urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:<identifier>. That convention should be
> followed here, making the requested values
> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:rdeCsv-1.0 and
> urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:epp:rdeCsv-1.0.
> 
> The authors believe that this change will have a major impact on current
> implementations, and a case can be made that the names should be
> maintained as this specification has been in development and used for years.
> 
> 
> Version 04 also addresses the feedback provided by Jim during the review of
> the examples in the draft:
> 
> 	https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/Y2G2yHJppT1DSb8_TY
> p4uMo0T-s
> 
> No material updates on this version and it maintains backward compatibility.
> 
> Regards,
> Gustavo
> 
> On 12/16/19, 14:10, "regext on behalf of [e-mail]" <regext-
> [e-mail] on behalf of [e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> 
>     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>     This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the
> IETF.
> 
>             Title           : Domain Name Registration Data (DNRD) Objects Mapping
>             Authors         : Gustavo Lozano
>                               James Gould
>                               Chethan Thippeswamy
>     	Filename        : draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-04.txt
>     	Pages           : 184
>     	Date            : 2019-12-16
> 
>     Abstract:
>        This document specifies the format, contents and semantics of Domain
>        Name Registration Data (DNRD) Escrow deposits for a Domain Name
>        Registry.
> 
> 
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