Re: [regext] [Ext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-04.txt

["Gould, James" <[e-mail]>]

Scott,

I believe the two identified changes you identified need to be correctly applied to the draft, and you are correct that the reference to draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-02 needs to be updated to draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-03.  Gustavo and I will work to fix these issues.

Thanks,  

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On 12/17/19, 10:52 AM, "regext on behalf of Hollenbeck, Scott" <[e-mail] on behalf of shollenbeck=[e-mail]> wrote:

    Thanks for the update, Gustavo. I think there are a few more minor edits to discuss. From Jim Gould's testing of the examples:
    
    https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/Y2G2yHJppT1DSb8_TYp4uMo0T-s
    
    " 6. Section 5.5.2.1.1 “idnLanguage CSV File Definition
    a. Example needs to be updated to use <rdeCsv:csv name="idnLanguage" sep=","> and not include the <rdeCsv:sep>,</rdeCsv:sep> element "
    
    " 7. Section 5.2.2.1.3 “hostAddresses” CSV File Definition
    a. Change reference of hostAddressesObj-YYYYMMDD.csv to hostAddresses-YYYYMMDD.csv"
    
    These are both still in the new document. Should they be?
    
    One minor idnit:
    
    "Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-02"
    
    That's all I found in my follow-up.
    
    Scott
    
    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: regext <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Gustavo Lozano
    > Sent: Monday, December 16, 2019 7:44 PM
    > To: [e-mail]
    > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] [Ext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-
    > objects-mapping-04.txt
    > 
    > Hello,
    > 
    > Hello,
    > 
    > Version 04 of draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping addresses the
    > feedback provided by Scott (thank you, great feedback) during document
    > shepherd review:
    > 
    > 	https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/TjRlL9OygsrZ_BXjnJDs7
    > UeHRJk
    > 
    > Regarding this suggestion:
    > 
    > The IANA Considerations section requests registration of multiple XML
    > namespaces and XML schemas. For example, urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:rdeCsv-
    > 1.0 and urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:rdeCsv-1.0. Recent convention has been
    > to include “epp” in the URIS for EPP-associated namespaces and schemas,
    > e.g. urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:<identifier>. That convention should be
    > followed here, making the requested values
    > urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:rdeCsv-1.0 and
    > urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:epp:rdeCsv-1.0.
    > 
    > The authors believe that this change will have a major impact on current
    > implementations, and a case can be made that the names should be
    > maintained as this specification has been in development and used for years.
    > 
    > 
    > Version 04 also addresses the feedback provided by Jim during the review of
    > the examples in the draft:
    > 
    > 	https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/Y2G2yHJppT1DSb8_TY
    > p4uMo0T-s
    > 
    > No material updates on this version and it maintains backward compatibility.
    > 
    > Regards,
    > Gustavo
    > 
    > On 12/16/19, 14:10, "regext on behalf of [e-mail]" <regext-
    > [e-mail] on behalf of [e-mail]> wrote:
    > 
    > 
    >     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
    > directories.
    >     This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the
    > IETF.
    > 
    >             Title           : Domain Name Registration Data (DNRD) Objects Mapping
    >             Authors         : Gustavo Lozano
    >                               James Gould
    >                               Chethan Thippeswamy
    >     	Filename        : draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-04.txt
    >     	Pages           : 184
    >     	Date            : 2019-12-16
    > 
    >     Abstract:
    >        This document specifies the format, contents and semantics of Domain
    >        Name Registration Data (DNRD) Escrow deposits for a Domain Name
    >        Registry.
    > 
    > 
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