Re: [regext] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-regext-login-security-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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From: "Gould, James" <jgould@verisign.com>
To: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>, "jgould=40verisign.com@dmarc.ietf.org" <jgould=40verisign.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "aamelnikov@fastmail.fm" <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
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Subject: Re: [regext] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-regext-login-security-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Scott,

Thanks, that is better.

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On 1/27/20, 7:39 AM, "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> wrote:

    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: regext <regext-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Gould, James
    > Sent: Friday, January 24, 2020 4:25 PM
    > To: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
    > Cc: draft-ietf-regext-login-security@ietf.org; Joseph Yee <jyee@afilias.info>fo>;
    > The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>rg>; regext-chairs@ietf.org; regext@ietf.org
    > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-
    > regext-login-security-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
    > 
    > Alexey,
    > 
    > I'll go ahead and add the following description of "whitespace" in section 1.1
    > "Conventions Used in This Document":
    > 
    > "whitespace" is based on the definition for the XML schema whiteSpace
    > datatype in [W3C.REC-xmlschema-2-20041028], which only includes the ASCII
    > whitespace characters #x9 (tab), #xA (linefeed), #xD (carriage return), and
    > #x20 (space).
    
    I'd recommend stronger language. It's not just "based on" the definition for the XML schema whiteSpace datatype, that datatype is normatively incorporated by reference. Perhaps something like this:
    
    '"whitespace" is defined by the XML schema whiteSpace datatype in [W3C.REC-xmlschema-2-20041028], which only includes the ASCII whitespace characters #x9 (tab), #xA (linefeed), #xD (carriage return), and #x20 (space).'
    
    Scott