Re: [regext] [Ext] Re: WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec

Gustavo Lozano <gustavo.lozano@icann.org> Mon, 06 April 2020 23:13 UTC

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Thank you Roger,

Comments inline.

Regards,
Gustavo

From: regext <regext-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Roger D Carney <rcarney@godaddy.com>
Date: Friday, February 14, 2020 at 11:06
To: regext <regext@ietf.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: [regext] WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec


Good Afternoon,



As I have mentioned previously, this informational draft has quite a few policy dependencies built into it that are currently being reviewed and will be changed by ICANN. The authors have addressed several of these potential policy issues but there are some that still exist (e.g. TCNIDs generated twice daily; use and definition of <tmNotice:notBefore> and <tmNotice:notAfter>).



I do support sending this to the IESG as this draft does depict the current operating environment, but due to these dependent policy items, I do believe this will need to be revisited and corrected once these policy decisions are made/changed, I would guess, at ICANN speed, in the next 2-3 years.





There are a few wording/grammatical issues that a good read should resolve (e.g. section 5.2.2, second paragraph, I believe “effective allocate” is meant to be “effectively allocate”, copyright dates should be updated).



GL- Fixed in version 07, here: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec-07.txt



Thanks

Roger





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Jim and Antoin

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