Re: [rfc-i] I-D Action: draft-rpc-rfc7322bis-00.txt

Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> Thu, 04 May 2023 15:16 UTC

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Hi all,

The I-D draft-rpc-rfc7322bis replaces draft-flanagan-7322bis. Sorry for 
the confusion on the change log. It has not been updated since the 
replacement. I've created an issue [1].

This update was to change the file name and authors, and to make the 
draft active.

Please provide any feedback on this draft on the rfc-interest list. You 
may open issues at 
https://github.com/rfc-editor/draft-rpc-rfc7322bis/issues.

Thanks!
Jean

[1] https://github.com/rfc-editor/draft-rpc-rfc7322bis/issues/25

On 5/4/23 9:56 AM, Robert Sparks wrote:
>
> On 5/3/23 6:55 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> I seem to be missing something. This is a -00 draft but it has a 
>> change log for versions through 05. What should we be comparing this 
>> with?
>
> I suggest draft-flanagan-7322bis, which this replaces?
>
> (the diffing widget at 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rpc-rfc7322bis/history/ follows 
> the history).
>
> The changelog in the series of versions of the older draft appears to 
> not have been touched past rev 05.
>
> The changelog for _this_ draft should be brought up to date, or 
> perhaps it would be better to just reset it - the level of detail (and 
> the age) of the changelogs for the older draft don't provide more than 
> the diffs would.
>
> RjS
>
>>
>> Also, it would be useful to have a "Changes since RFC7322" section.
>>
>> Regards
>>    Brian Carpenter
>>
>> On 02-May-23 11:25, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories.
>>>
>>>     Title           : RFC Style Guide
>>>     Authors         : Sandy Ginoza
>>>                       Jean Mahoney
>>>                       Alice Russo
>>>     Filename        : draft-rpc-rfc7322bis-00.txt
>>>     Pages           : 29
>>>     Date            : 2023-05-01
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>     This document describes the fundamental and unique style 
>>> conventions
>>>     and editorial policies currently in use for the RFC Series. It
>>>     captures the RFC Editor's basic requirements and offers guidance
>>>     regarding the style and structure of an RFC.  Additional 
>>> guidance is
>>>     captured on a website that reflects the experimental nature of that
>>>     guidance and prepares it for future inclusion in the RFC Style 
>>> Guide.
>>>     This document obsoletes RFC 7322, "RFC Style Guide".
>>>
>>>     Note: This draft is being developed and discussed in the GitHub 
>>> repo
>>> <https://github.com/rfc-editor/draft-rpc-rfc7322bis>, but any
>>>     substantive change should be discussed on <rfc-interest@rfc-
>>>     interest.org>.
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rpc-rfc7322bis/
>>>
>>> There is also an HTML version available at:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-rpc-rfc7322bis-00.html
>>>
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