Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
Wesley Eddy <wes@mti-systems.com> Mon, 21 February 2022 20:33 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
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On 2/21/2022 3:06 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > I think Wes is showing how people who have not been closely involved > might be puzzled by the appearance of this model "out of the blue", > and I think a few light editorial touches could fix this. In line... That's exactly right ... I paid no attention to it, until now! :) The changes you suggest are small, but work well for me; thanks.
- [Rfced-future] Fwd: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call re… Mirja Kuehlewind
- Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last cal… Eliot Lear
- Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last cal… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last cal… Wesley Eddy
- Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last cal… Peter Saint-Andre