[Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 22 April 2021 02:47 UTC

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Subject: [Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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[[ nits ]]

[ section 4.1 ]

* "sets its IPv6 address" could perhaps be something like
  "sets a selected IPv6 source address"

[ section 4.3 ]

* "r" is not depicted in Figure 3?  Probably "X"?  Or update Figure to
  match the field description.

[Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-ro… Erik Kline via Datatracker
Re: [Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-iet… Charles Perkins