Re: AD-review: draft-gill-gtsh

David Meyer <dmm@1-4-5.net> Fri, 12 September 2003 20:24 UTC

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From: David Meyer <dmm@1-4-5.net>
To: Alex Zinin <zinin@psg.com>
Cc: routing-discussion@ietf.org, Vijay Gill <vgill@vijaygill.com>, heas@shrubbery.net
Subject: Re: AD-review: draft-gill-gtsh
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Date: Fri, 12 Sep 2003 13:23:01 -0700

	Alex,

>>  1. BTSH reference in Abstract.
>>  
>>     The abstract refers to BTSH. You may want to consider
>>     making it BTSH-agnostic, since the reader will not have
>>     any document to refer to when the BTSH draft expires.

	will do.

>> 
>>  2. Section 3.1.1 "Intra-domain Protocol Handling"
>> 
>>     The section reads as BGP-specific. I.e., it should be
>>     possible to use the TTL method to protect, say, OSPF
>>     single-hop adjacencies.

	will fix.

>>  3. Prior art
>> 
>>     You may want to point out that the TTL method has been
>>     used in other protocols, and point to IPv6 ND [RFC2461],
>>     for example.

	Will do.

	Remember also that I want to change the name. Do I need
	to issue an -01 or can I do this after the rfc-ed is done
	with it? 

	Thanks,

	Dave

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