Re: [rtcweb] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04.txt

Hi,

The first sentence of the Abstract in the WebRTC Data Channel Establishment
Protocol incorrectly refers to the "WebRTC working group. (The wording in
the second line also needs editing.)

I suggest copying the first sentence of the Abstract from WebRTC Data
Channels (-08 version) so it reads -

The Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers working group is charged
   to provide protocol support for direct interactive rich communication
   using audio, video, and data between two peers' web-browsers.

Cheers,
/Barry Dingle
Australia

On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 8:03 PM, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers
> Working Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : WebRTC Data Channel Establishment Protocol
>         Authors         : Randell Jesup
>                           Salvatore Loreto
>                           Michael Tuexen
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04.txt
>         Pages           : 12
>         Date            : 2014-04-09
>
> Abstract:
>    The Web Real-Time Communication (WebRTC) working group is charged to
>    provide protocols to support for direct interactive rich
>    communication using audio, video, and data between two peers' web-
>    browsers.  This document specifies a simple protocol for establishing
>    symmetric data channels between the peers.  It uses a two way
>    handshake and allows sending of user data without waiting for the
>    handshake to complete.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>
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