Re: [rtcweb] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04.txt

Barry Dingle <btdingle@gmail.com> Wed, 09 April 2014 12:18 UTC

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From: Barry Dingle <btdingle@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 9 Apr 2014 22:17:37 +1000
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Hi,

The first sentence of the Abstract in the WebRTC Data Channel Establishment
Protocol incorrectly refers to the "WebRTC working group. (The wording in
the second line also needs editing.)

I suggest copying the first sentence of the Abstract from WebRTC Data
Channels (-08 version) so it reads -

The Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers working group is charged
   to provide protocol support for direct interactive rich communication
   using audio, video, and data between two peers' web-browsers.



Cheers,
/Barry Dingle
Australia


On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 8:03 PM, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers
> Working Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : WebRTC Data Channel Establishment Protocol
>         Authors         : Randell Jesup
>                           Salvatore Loreto
>                           Michael Tuexen
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04.txt
>         Pages           : 12
>         Date            : 2014-04-09
>
> Abstract:
>    The Web Real-Time Communication (WebRTC) working group is charged to
>    provide protocols to support for direct interactive rich
>    communication using audio, video, and data between two peers' web-
>    browsers.  This document specifies a simple protocol for establishing
>    symmetric data channels between the peers.  It uses a two way
>    handshake and allows sending of user data without waiting for the
>    handshake to complete.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
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