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Re: Comments on draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-01

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Sat, 18 August 2018 06:58 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 18 Aug 2018 02:58:16 -0400
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Subject: Re: Comments on draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-01
To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
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Looks good to me.

Thanks,
Donald
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 Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
 1424 Pro Shop Court, Davenport, FL 33896 USA
 d3e3e3@gmail.com

On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 6:49 PM, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Donald,
> thank you for the thorough review, the most detailed and pointed comments
> (received the editorial comments already).
> I'd like to propose an update to the 2nd paragraph (see below in-line). Hope
> it addresses your concern.
>
> All the editorial suggestions have been accepted and updates applied
> accordingly.
>
> Attached please find the diff with the new working version of the draft.
>
> Best regards,
> Greg
>
>
> On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 9:20 AM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have reviewed this draft and have two main suggestions:
>>
>> There appears to be some conflict between the 2nd paragraph of Section
>> 1 and the 4th paragraph. Paragraph 2 talks about layer 2 and 3
>> underlay while the 4th paragraph implies only layer 3.
>
> OLD TEXT:
>   The VXLAN segments/overlay
>    networks are overlaid on top of these Layer 2 or Layer 3 networks.
> NEW TEXT:
>    The VXLAN segments/overlays
>    are overlaid on top of Layer 3 network.
>
>>
>> Also, I recommend that a request (template, RFC 7042) for assignment
>> of a MAC address as mentioned in the IANA Considerations section be
>> submitted now or at least soon. A single MAC address is cheap and
>> requires only Expert approval which I think would be forthcoming.
>>
>> I have additional minor editorial suggestions I have sent directly to
>> the authors.
>>
>> Preferably with my suggestions incorporated :-) I think this draft is
>> ready for WG Last Call.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Donald
>> ===============================
>>  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
>>  1424 Pro Shop Court, Davenport, FL 33896 USA
>>  d3e3e3@gmail.com

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