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Re: Comments on draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-01

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Fri, 17 August 2018 22:49 UTC

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From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 17 Aug 2018 15:49:51 -0700
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Subject: Re: Comments on draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-01
To: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
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Hi Donald,
thank you for the thorough review, the most detailed and pointed comments
(received the editorial comments already).
I'd like to propose an update to the 2nd paragraph (see below in-line).
Hope it addresses your concern.

All the editorial suggestions have been accepted and updates applied
accordingly.

Attached please find the diff with the new working version of the draft.

Best regards,
Greg


On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 9:20 AM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I have reviewed this draft and have two main suggestions:
>
> There appears to be some conflict between the 2nd paragraph of Section
> 1 and the 4th paragraph. Paragraph 2 talks about layer 2 and 3
> underlay while the 4th paragraph implies only layer 3.
>
OLD TEXT:
  The VXLAN segments/overlay
   networks are overlaid on top of these Layer 2 or Layer 3 networks.
NEW TEXT:
   The VXLAN segments/overlays
   are overlaid on top of Layer 3 network.


> Also, I recommend that a request (template, RFC 7042) for assignment
> of a MAC address as mentioned in the IANA Considerations section be
> submitted now or at least soon. A single MAC address is cheap and
> requires only Expert approval which I think would be forthcoming.
>
> I have additional minor editorial suggestions I have sent directly to
> the authors.
>
> Preferably with my suggestions incorporated :-) I think this draft is
> ready for WG Last Call.
>
> Thanks,
> Donald
> ===============================
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