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Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> Tue, 01 August 2023 16:36 UTC

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To: Ben Niven-Jenkins <ben@niven-jenkins.co.uk>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-02
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Ben:

Can you provide additional detail regarding your concerns?

You state:

“The only suggestion I would have is to provide a short overview introducing BGP CAR and
color aware routing before leaping into terminology and the details of the BGP
CAR SAFI. Expanding the introduction section with an extra paragraph or two
would be sufficient.”

Sue Hares
IDR WG chair shepherd draft

From: Ben Niven-Jenkins <ben@niven-jenkins.co.uk>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-02

On 31 Jul 2023, at 20:56, Ben Niven-Jenkins via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote: Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins Review result: Has Issues Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate
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On 31 Jul 2023, at 20:56, Ben Niven-Jenkins via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:

Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
Review result: Has Issues

Hello

I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis/<https://shared.outlook.inky.com/link?domain=datatracker.ietf.org&t=h.eJwVzEkSgyAARNGrWKwjgyCCK6_CGImIFmAWSeXukW3_rvcFV45g7sBa61lmhKyqqmZlNpdhcNXDIz-RPQyyWfnat6nfz1j67A0leNKhIPDowNaQ5Op9J3gUXJIBlVVlV5ZkPys0x46kV5gaO0nMiZk0ttOgBRN88JgZMkhEuMSCspFwSFlTXVO1S0sKb5f6l0tbSOXG4LW1bu-erhh_fxqJPWk.MEQCIFa8NM_SsZ2z4IQ4nHCyihhWg1xCNOXKiy9_foYQA1QhAiBpfOToYTfKUSUjWddwHZmWCvgxbxu_ahJHdg_HRVK6hg>

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Ben



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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-02
Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
Review Date: 31 July 2023
Intended Status: Experimental

Summary:
I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved
before it is submitted to the IESG.

Comments:
The document provides lots of details in the main sections and examples in the
appendices. I think that is generally ready to be published. The only
suggestion I would have is to provide a short overview introducing BGP CAR and
color aware routing before leaping into terminology and the details of the BGP
CAR SAFI. Expanding the introduction section with an extra paragraph or two
would be sufficient.

Thanks
Ben

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