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Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-02

Ben Niven-Jenkins <ben@niven-jenkins.co.uk> Thu, 03 August 2023 20:18 UTC

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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-02
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Hi Dhananjaya,

> On 2 Aug 2023, at 11:41, Dhananjaya Rao (dhrao) <dhrao=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Ben,
>  
> We appreciate your review of the CAR draft. We will add some overview text as you suggest.

Thanks.

Ben

>  
> Regards,
> -Dhananjaya
>  
> From: Ben Niven-Jenkins via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Date: Tuesday, August 1, 2023 at 1:26 AM
> To: rtg-dir@ietf.org <rtg-dir@ietf.org>
> Cc: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car.all@ietf.org>, idr@ietf.org <idr@ietf.org>
> Subject: Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-02
> 
> Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
> Review result: Has Issues
> 
> Hello
> 
> I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft.
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis/>
> 
> The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform
> an “early” review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the
> IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft’s lifetime
> as a working group document. The purpose of the early review depends on the
> stage that the document has reached.
> 
> For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
> https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir>
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-02
> Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
> Review Date: 31 July 2023
> Intended Status: Experimental
> 
> Summary:
> I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved
> before it is submitted to the IESG.
> 
> Comments:
> The document provides lots of details in the main sections and examples in the
> appendices. I think that is generally ready to be published. The only
> suggestion I would have is to provide a short overview introducing BGP CAR and
> color aware routing before leaping into terminology and the details of the BGP
> CAR SAFI. Expanding the introduction section with an extra paragraph or two
> would be sufficient.
> 
> Thanks
> Ben
>

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