Re: [Seamoby] Review Period Reminder

Hi John,

> 1) Status of this memo section needs to be updated with new boilerplate.
> 2) Fix pagination so figures don't cross page boundaries.
> 3) Stray nroff code in section 5.2 - "in 6"
> 4) Formating problem with section header 9.2

I'll see what I can do. I might need some help with the nroffing. The last
time I did it, nroff inserted maybe 4 or 5 blank lines at the page breaks.

>5) There are references to [IANA] but the document is not listed in the
 >  references.

OK.

>6) Section 2, paragraph starting:
>
>     Context transfer protocol messages use Feature Profile Types (FPTs)
>     that identify the way that data is organized for the particular
>     feature contexts. The FPTs are registered in a number space (with
>     IANA Type Numbers) that allows a node to unambiguously determine the
>     type of context and the context parameters present in the protocol
>     messages.
>
>   You probably want to add a reference to [IANA] there.

OK.

Thanx for looking through it.

            jak

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