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RE: [Seamoby] Review Period Reminder

john.loughney@nokia.com Tue, 04 May 2004 07:07 UTC

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James,

A few smalll comments on this draft:

http://www.geocities.com/kempf42/draft-ietf-seamoby-iana-00.txt

1) Status of this memo section needs to be updated with new boilerplate.
2) Abstract margins need fixing.
3) Needs IPR text
4) Is this a protocol document or a information document? If it is
   info, then probably keywords (MUST; SHOULD; MAY, etc) shouldn't
   be used.
5) Section 5.2 - are these all of the possible L2

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