Re: [secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-05

Sean Turner <sean@sn3rd.com> Tue, 27 February 2024 15:56 UTC

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Date: Tue, 27 Feb 2024 10:56:13 -0500
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-05
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Many thanks for confirming!

spt

> On Feb 24, 2024, at 16:11, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sean,
> 
> Thanks for the review. 
> 
> Regarding your second comment, yes, mobile satellites movements are pre-determined, and it's a TVR use case. 
> 
> Thanks,
> Yingzhen
> 
> On Fri, Feb 23, 2024 at 6:21 PM Sean Turner via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> Reviewer: Sean Turner
> Review result: Ready
> 
> Hi! This is my second review of this I-D; I compared -04 to -05.  I had two
> points:
> 
> 1. Thanks for a greatly improved security considerations section. While it is
> still essentially empty, now readers will know why! ;)
> 
> Changing my review to "Ready" based on the changes to the security
> considerations.
> 
> 2. I am going to infer from the changes made in s5.3 (dropping the intro
> sentence and adding the sentence about the ground station) means that mobile
> satellites are not a non-deterministic scenario. But, it would be nice to
> confirm this. 
>  
> Cheers,
> spt
> 
>