Re: [secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-05

Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 24 February 2024 21:11 UTC

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Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2024 13:11:38 -0800
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-05
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Hi Sean,

Thanks for the review.

Regarding your second comment, yes, mobile satellites movements are
pre-determined, and it's a TVR use case.

Thanks,
Yingzhen

On Fri, Feb 23, 2024 at 6:21 PM Sean Turner via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Sean Turner
> Review result: Ready
>
> Hi! This is my second review of this I-D; I compared -04 to -05.  I had two
> points:
>
> 1. Thanks for a greatly improved security considerations section. While it
> is
> still essentially empty, now readers will know why! ;)
>
> Changing my review to "Ready" based on the changes to the security
> considerations.
>
> 2. I am going to infer from the changes made in s5.3 (dropping the intro
> sentence and adding the sentence about the ground station) means that
> mobile
> satellites are not a non-deterministic scenario. But, it would be nice to
> confirm this.


>
Cheers,
> spt
>
>
>