[secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-05

Sean Turner via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 24 February 2024 02:21 UTC

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Date: Fri, 23 Feb 2024 18:21:58 -0800
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Subject: [secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-05

Reviewer: Sean Turner
Review result: Ready

Hi! This is my second review of this I-D; I compared -04 to -05.  I had two
points:

1. Thanks for a greatly improved security considerations section. While it is
still essentially empty, now readers will know why! ;)

Changing my review to "Ready" based on the changes to the security
considerations.

2. I am going to infer from the changes made in s5.3 (dropping the intro
sentence and adding the sentence about the ground station) means that mobile
satellites are not a non-deterministic scenario. But, it would be nice to
confirm this.

Cheers,
spt

[secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tvr… Sean Turner via Datatracker
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