[Sipping] FW: Comments on draft-ietf-sipping-app-interaction-framework-03

Gonzalo

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Joe Zebarth

ATI Strategic Standards
Nortel (Canada)
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>  -----Original Message-----
> From: 	Zebarth, Joe [CAR:1A12:EXCH]  
> Sent:	Wednesday, December 01, 2004 1:29 PM
> To:	'sipping@ietf.org'
> Subject:	Comments on draft-ietf-sipping-app-interaction-framework-03
> 
> Colleagues
> 
> The following are a few comments that I have with respect to
> draft-ietf-sipping-app-interaction-framework-03.
> 
> Would it be worth noting in the abstract and/or the introduction that this
> document is providing IANA registration for a new "SIP Option Tag" and a
> new "Header Field Parameter"?
> 
> Is there an inconsistency between Figure 1 which shows the "user
> interface" on the network side of the user device and the definition
> "Focusless User Interface: A user interface which has no ability to
> perform focus determination.  An example of a focusless user interface is
> a keypad on a telephone."  So if the definition is correct should Figure 1
> show a "user interface" on the user side of the "user device".  If so,
> should we consider a new term that is less confusing for the functionality
> currently labeled as "user interface" in Figure 1?
> 
> In the definition for "Barge-In", possibly the last sentence should come
> to the front.  Minor rewording would be required if this is done.
> 
> On page 18 the words "the markup waits".  I observe that the term "markup"
> is not in the definitions section, should it be added or is there a better
> term for this functionality?
>   
> 
> 
> Kindest Regards
> 
> Joe Zebarth
> ATI Strategic Standards
> Nortel Networks (Canada)
> Phone: +1 613 765 8481
> ESN:    6+395 8481
> Fax:     +1 613 763 2697
> ESN:    6+393 2697
> http://www.nortelnetworks.com <http://www.nortelnetworks.com> 
> 
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