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Re: [Slim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent-06.txt

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Sat, 15 October 2016 12:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Slim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent-06.txt
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Hi Nik,

> On 14 Oct 2016, at 19:30, Nik Tomkinson <rfc.nik.tomkinson@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks Doug.
> 
> The only things I have concerns about are:
>  - In the Introduction, I reference the real-time I-D but should it really refer to the RFC number of the real-time document? If so, this means that the non-real-time document cannot be published until the real-time document has an RFC number assigned which ties the two together in terms of readiness to publish. I believe that Randall has done the same from his document.

An informative reference (which is not going to delay publication) sounds fine, unless you think there is a true dependency in order to implement?

>  - I use the future tense in the IANA Considerations section (eg. The multipart/multilingual MIME type will be registered). Is this OK?

Yes. This section will be edited during publication and will be converted to past tense.
> 
> Does anyone have any suggestions or comments on these two?
> 
> Nik.
> 
>> On 14 October 2016 at 17:04, Doug Ewell <doug@ewellic.org> wrote:
>> I read through this draft and did not find anything I felt was in need
>> of improvement.
>> 
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