Re: [Slim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent-06.txt

Nik Tomkinson <rfc.nik.tomkinson@gmail.com> Sat, 15 October 2016 17:56 UTC

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Hi Alexey, thanks for the comments.

No, I don't think that the real-time draft is a dependency at all.

Nik.

On 15 October 2016 at 13:24, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> wrote:

> Hi Nik,
>
> On 14 Oct 2016, at 19:30, Nik Tomkinson <rfc.nik.tomkinson@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Thanks Doug.
>
> The only things I have concerns about are:
>  - In the Introduction, I reference the real-time I-D but should it really
> refer to the RFC number of the real-time document? If so, this means that
> the non-real-time document cannot be published until the real-time document
> has an RFC number assigned which ties the two together in terms of
> readiness to publish. I believe that Randall has done the same from his
> document.
>
>
> An informative reference (which is not going to delay publication) sounds
> fine, unless you think there is a true dependency in order to implement?
>
>  - I use the future tense in the IANA Considerations section (eg. The
> multipart/multilingual MIME type *will* be registered). Is this OK?
>
>
> Yes. This section will be edited during publication and will be converted
> to past tense.
>
>
> Does anyone have any suggestions or comments on these two?
>
> Nik.
>
> On 14 October 2016 at 17:04, Doug Ewell <doug@ewellic.org> wrote:
>
>> I read through this draft and did not find anything I felt was in need
>> of improvement.
>>
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Multiple Language Content Type Internet Draft:

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