Re: [Softwires] Work Group Last call for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-07 - Ends 9th Nov

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Mon, 13 November 2017 07:26 UTC

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Hi Ian,

Fixed.

Thanks.
Cheers,
Med

De : Ian Farrer [mailto:ianfarrer@gmx.com]
Envoyé : lundi 13 novembre 2017 04:35
À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN
Cc : Softwires list; draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang@ietf.org
Objet : Re: [Softwires] Work Group Last call for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-07 - Ends 9th Nov

Hi Med,

One small additional change (I don’t know why I haven’t seen this before) - Please can you rename the document 'YANG Data Modules for Dual-Stack Lite’ to be inline with the naming of other related RFCs.

Thanks,
Ian

On 10. Nov 2017, at 20:17, <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>> <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>> wrote:

Re-,

OK. The updated version with your comments will be submitted next Monday.

Cheers,
Med

De : Ian Farrer [mailto:ianfarrer@gmx.com]
Envoyé : vendredi 10 novembre 2017 12:43
À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN
Cc : Softwires list; draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang@ietf.org>
Objet : Re: [Softwires] Work Group Last call for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-07 - Ends 9th Nov

Hi Med,




Model comments:
m1. v6-v4-dscp-preservation - deals with whether the DCSP of the incoming
packet will be copied to the header of the outgoing packet or not.
Would this be better implemented as a feature in the model, as this would
allow the use in the mapping entry to be made conditional (with if-
feature) under the mapping-entry augment.

[Med] This is better handled by adding this statement:

   when "/if:interfaces/if:interface/dslite-aftr:v6-v4-dscp-preservation='true'";



Yes, that works.

Cheers,
Ian