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Re: [Softwires] Work Group Last call for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-07 - Ends 9th Nov

Ian Farrer <ianfarrer@gmx.com> Mon, 13 November 2017 03:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] Work Group Last call for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-07 - Ends 9th Nov
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Hi Med,

One small additional change (I don’t know why I haven’t seen this before) - Please can you rename the document 'YANG Data Modules for Dual-Stack Lite’ to be inline with the naming of other related RFCs.

Thanks,
Ian

> On 10. Nov 2017, at 20:17, <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:
> 
> Re-,
>  
> OK. The updated version with your comments will be submitted next Monday.
>  
> Cheers,
> Med
>  
> De : Ian Farrer [mailto:ianfarrer@gmx.com] 
> Envoyé : vendredi 10 novembre 2017 12:43
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN
> Cc : Softwires list; draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: [Softwires] Work Group Last call for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-07 - Ends 9th Nov
>  
> Hi Med,
> 
> 
> 
> Model comments:
> m1. v6-v4-dscp-preservation - deals with whether the DCSP of the incoming
> packet will be copied to the header of the outgoing packet or not.
> Would this be better implemented as a feature in the model, as this would
> allow the use in the mapping entry to be made conditional (with if-
> feature) under the mapping-entry augment.
> 
> [Med] This is better handled by adding this statement:
> 
>    when "/if:interfaces/if:interface/dslite-aftr:v6-v4-dscp-preservation='true'";
> 
>  
> Yes, that works.
>  
> Cheers,
> Ian

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