Re: [Softwires] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: (with COMMENT)

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Wed, 12 June 2019 05:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman, 

Fixed those in my local copy. Thank you. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Roman Danyliw via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
> Envoyé : mercredi 12 juin 2019 03:26
> À : The IESG
> Cc : draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius@ietf.org; Yong Cui; Ian Farrer;
> softwire-chairs@ietf.org; ianfarrer@gmx.com; softwires@ietf.org
> Objet : Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24:
> (with COMMENT)
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> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> A few editorial nits:
> 
> -- Section 3.  Per “Depending on the deployment scenario …”, this sentence
> doesn’t parse for me.  I think s/so// would address it.
> 
> -- Section 3.1.4.2.  Typo.  s/pecifies/specifies/
>