Re: [Softwires] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 02 December 2015 20:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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On 12/2/2015 9:05 AM, Dong Jiang wrote:
> Dear Benoit,
>
> Thank you for the comments. We will move the swmMIB module under 
> mib-2. We will also revise the grammar issues accordingly.
>
> Please let us know if we can upload a new version.
Feel free, unless your responsible AD Terry thinks otherwise.

Regards, Benoit
>
> Best regards,
> Jiang Dong
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> 2015-12-01 12:53 GMT+02:00 Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com 
> <mailto:bclaise@cisco.com>>:
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>     draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: Discuss
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>     DISCUSS:
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>     As advised by the MIB doctors, draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-04 (and
>     draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib too btw) must be moved under mib-2
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>     >From Dave Thaler (MIB doctors)
>     It does contain an number of typos and English grammar issues that
>     should
>     be addressed before publication.
>     I put a marked up copy up where it should shortly appear as
>     http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12.pdf
>     <http://research.microsoft.com/%7Edthaler/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12.pdf>
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