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Re: [Softwires] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Dong Jiang <knight.dongjiang@gmail.com> Fri, 11 December 2015 13:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Dear Benoit,

We have uploaded a new version of the mesh mib draft. We have moved the
swmMIB module under mib-2. The typos and grammar issues are corrected. We
also addressed all the issues mentioned by other reviewers.

Please help to check if your DISCUSS is solved. Thank you very much for
your help!

Best regards,
Jiang Dong

2015-12-02 22:51 GMT+02:00 Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>:

> On 12/2/2015 9:05 AM, Dong Jiang wrote:
>
> Dear Benoit,
>
> Thank you for the comments. We will move the swmMIB module under mib-2. We
> will also revise the grammar issues accordingly.
>
> Please let us know if we can upload a new version.
>
> Feel free, unless your responsible AD Terry thinks otherwise.
>
> Regards, Benoit
>
>
> Best regards,
> Jiang Dong
>
> 2015-12-01 12:53 GMT+02:00 Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>:
>
>> Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: Discuss
>>
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>> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
>> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
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>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib/
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>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> DISCUSS:
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>>
>> As advised by the MIB doctors,  draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-04 (and
>> draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib too btw) must be moved under mib-2
>>
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
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>>
>> >From Dave Thaler (MIB doctors)
>> It does contain an number of typos and English grammar issues that should
>> be addressed before publication.
>> I put a marked up copy up where it should shortly appear as
>> http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12.pdf
>>
>>
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