Re: [Softwires] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Dong Jiang <knight.dongjiang@gmail.com> Wed, 02 December 2015 08:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Dear Benoit,

Thank you for the comments. We will move the swmMIB module under mib-2. We
will also revise the grammar issues accordingly.

Please let us know if we can upload a new version.

Best regards,
Jiang Dong

2015-12-01 12:53 GMT+02:00 Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>:

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> As advised by the MIB doctors,  draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-04 (and
> draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib too btw) must be moved under mib-2
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> >From Dave Thaler (MIB doctors)
> It does contain an number of typos and English grammar issues that should
> be addressed before publication.
> I put a marked up copy up where it should shortly appear as
> http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12.pdf
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