Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang-04 as Standard Track, closed by 27 June 2018
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Subject: Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang-04 as Standard Track, closed by 27 June 2018
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Hi Ian, Works for me. Thanks. Cheers, Med De : ianfarrer@gmx.com [mailto:ianfarrer@gmx.com] Envoyé : vendredi 29 juin 2018 09:59 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN; Sheng Jiang Cc : Softwires WG; softwire-chairs@ietf.org; Andy Wingo Objet : Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang-04 as Standard Track, closed by 27 June 2018 Hi Sheng /Med, @Sheng, Thanks for the review. @Med, Thanks for the quick update. A couple of other things: There’s an outstanding comment on model element descriptions given as “…”. Proposed new text: notification softwire-binding-instance-event description: "The ID of the binding-instance that generated the notification."; leaf-list modified-entry description "The ID of the the binding-table entry that has been modified."; ------ I just did a quick read through of -05. There are a few small language cleanups that I would like to make: Section 2.1 s/Provides configuration and monitoring for softwire CE element/Provides configuration and monitoring for the softwire CE element/ s/Provides configuration and monitoring for softwire BR element/Provides configuration and monitoring for the softwire BR element/ Section 2.2 s/be imported here, as needed/be imported, as needed/ ietf-softwire-ce:binding-entry/br-ipv6-addr description s/The IPv6 address for of the binding BR./The IPv6 address for the binding BR./ ietf-softwire-br:br-instances/algorithm description s/Indicate that the instance supports the MAP-E and MAP-T functions./Indicate that the instance supports the MAP-E and MAP-T functions./ If there’s no objection to the above changes, I’ll update and post later on today. Cheers, Ian On 27. Jun 2018, at 10:54, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote: Hi Sheng, Many thanks for the careful review. An updated version which integrates your comments is available online:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-yang/?include_text=1 See more inline. Cheers, Med
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… Sheng Jiang
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… Qi Sun
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… Linhui Sun
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… Sheng Jiang
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… Andy Wingo
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… Sheng Jiang
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… ianfarrer
- [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang-04 … Sheng Jiang
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… ianfarrer
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… ianfarrer
- Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang… Sheng Jiang