Re: [tcpm] WGLC for MSS document

Alexander Zimmermann <alexander.zimmermann@nets.rwth-aachen.de> Thu, 20 August 2009 14:50 UTC

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Hi David,

some minor comments on the draft.

1. Needs boilerplate update (Copyright section)

2. IMHO in line 50: %s/to do about TCP options/to do about IP and TCP  
options/

3. Just one sentence later: "RFC-1122 [Braden89] attempted to clarify  
this in section 4.2.2.6, but
there still seems to be confusion." What is the problem here with RFC  
1122? Why does RFC 1122
does not manage to clarify the situation. I think one or two sentence  
more explanation would be
great.

Alex


Am 18.08.2009 um 19:38 schrieb Eddy, Wesley M. (GRC-MS00)[Verizon]:

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