Re: [Teas-ns-dt] New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

["Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)" <[e-mail]>]

Sure Uma. I will share them in next couple of days.
It will be nice to see you in person next week.

Cheers,
Reza



From: Uma Chunduri <[e-mail]>
Date: Thursday, November 14, 2019 at 3:14 AM
To: Eric Gray <eric.gray=[e-mail]>
Cc: Reza Rokui <[e-mail]>, Kiran Makhijani <[e-mail]>, Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]>, Jari Arkko <[e-mail]>, "[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: [Teas-ns-dt] New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

Hi Reza,

Thanks for the 00 document put forth. This is useful.

I recently joined this list and missed the original document where Eric's comments/feedback was given (I did see the archive, but couldn't find it) . It would be nice to share the same and respond what has been addressed (if any).


Cheers!

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Uma C.

On Tue, Nov 12, 2019 at 5:53 PM Eric Gray <eric.gray=[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
Reza,

              Thanks.

              Typically, in other IETF work I have been involved in, the draft authors/editors would list the comments in some form and say something about how they will be (or are) addressed.

              Updating the draft and asking people to review it to see if their comments are addressed is something of a less review-friendly approach.

              This is very much less review friendly if the folks on the design team have to send the draft out for review by the relevant experts – especially if there are multiple disciplines involved (as in this case).

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Eric

From: Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Sent: Tuesday, November 12, 2019 8:44 PM
To: Eric Gray <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Kiran Makhijani <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Jari Arkko <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
Importance: High

Eric,

I also referred to the word document which was attached to your email. I have your emai.
I update the draft-00 and send it for review. I will also update the word and send it to you.

Reza



From: Eric Gray <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Date: Wednesday, November 13, 2019 at 8:17 AM
To: Reza Rokui <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, Kiran Makhijani <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, Jari Arkko <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

Reza,

The word document was what you had shared with us earlier, asking for comments.  Most of my comments are actually in the word document itself, with only the general comments in the E-Mail itself.

If you need me to forward the earlier E-Mail – so that you can see the comments in the Word document – please let me know.

By the way, perhaps you should not be in such a rush to produce a new version for everyone to review that you don’t actually get around to the comments from their last review.

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Eric

From: Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Sent: Tuesday, November 12, 2019 8:09 PM
To: Eric Gray <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Kiran Makhijani <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Jari Arkko <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>
Cc: Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
Importance: High

Eric,

Thanks for your comments. I am reading your comments which was attached to your previous email.
Since your previous comments were based on the word document not the draft itself, I will address them in the updated draft and send you the new one.

Reza




From: Eric Gray <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Date: Wednesday, November 13, 2019 at 7:58 AM
To: Reza Rokui <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, Kiran Makhijani <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, Jari Arkko <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

Reza,

              Is there any way that you could provide some description of how the comments were addressed, as opposed to the statement that they were?

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Eric

From: Teas-ns-dt <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> On Behalf Of Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)
Sent: Sunday, November 3, 2019 10:21 AM
To: Kiran Makhijani <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Jari Arkko <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>
Cc: Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: [Teas-ns-dt] FW: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt


All,



As per our discussion during the network slicing DT meeting on Oct 31, the first version of draft "IETF Definition of Transport Slice" has been submitted. Authors have incorporated the comments.

Please review. Any other comments are welcome.



Cheers,

Reza



On 2019-11-03, 10:13 AM, "[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:





    A new version of I-D, draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

    has been successfully submitted by Reza Rokui and posted to the

    IETF repository.



    Name:            draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition

    Revision:  00

    Title:           IETF Definition of Transport Slice

    Document date:    2019-11-02

    Group:           Individual Submission

    Pages:           15

    URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

    Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition/

    Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00

    Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition





    Abstract:

       This document describes the definition of transport slice in IETF and

       considerations on implementation (realization) of transport slice.

       This work is part of work on TEAS WG network slicing Design Team.









    Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission

    until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>.



    The IETF Secretariat




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