Re: [Teas-ns-dt] New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

[Uma Chunduri <[e-mail]>]

Hi Reza,

Thanks for the 00 document put forth. This is useful.

I recently joined this list and missed the original document where Eric's
comments/feedback was given (I did see the archive, but couldn't find it) .
It would be nice to share the same and respond what has been addressed (if
any).


Cheers!

--
Uma C.

On Tue, Nov 12, 2019 at 5:53 PM Eric Gray <eric.gray=
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Reza,
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>               Thanks.
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>               Typically, in other IETF work I have been involved in, the
> draft authors/editors would list the comments in some form and say
> something about how they will be (or are) addressed.
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>               Updating the draft and asking people to review it to see if
> their comments are addressed is something of a less review-friendly
> approach.
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>               This is very much less review friendly if the folks on the
> design team have to send the draft out for review by the relevant experts –
> especially if there are multiple disciplines involved (as in this case).
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> --
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> Eric
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> *From:* Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]>
> *Sent:* Tuesday, November 12, 2019 8:44 PM
> *To:* Eric Gray <[e-mail]>; Kiran Makhijani <
> [e-mail]>; Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]>;
> Jari Arkko <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
> *Subject:* Re: New Version Notification for
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
> *Importance:* High
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> Eric,
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> I also referred to the word document which was attached to your email. I
> have your emai.
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> I update the draft-00 and send it for review. I will also update the word
> and send it to you.
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>
> Reza
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> *From: *Eric Gray <[e-mail]>
> *Date: *Wednesday, November 13, 2019 at 8:17 AM
> *To: *Reza Rokui <[e-mail]>, Kiran Makhijani <
> [e-mail]>, Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]>,
> Jari Arkko <[e-mail]>, "[e-mail]" <
> [e-mail]>
> *Subject: *RE: New Version Notification for
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
>
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> Reza,
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> The word document was what you had shared with us earlier, asking for
> comments.  Most of my comments are actually in the word document itself,
> with only the general comments in the E-Mail itself.
>
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> If you need me to forward the earlier E-Mail – so that you can see the
> comments in the Word document – please let me know.
>
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> By the way, perhaps you should not be in such a rush to produce a new
> version for everyone to review that you don’t actually get around to the
> comments from their last review.
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>
> --
>
> Eric
>
>
>
> *From:* Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]>
> *Sent:* Tuesday, November 12, 2019 8:09 PM
> *To:* Eric Gray <[e-mail]>; Kiran Makhijani <
> [e-mail]>; Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]>;
> Jari Arkko <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
> *Cc:* Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]>
> *Subject:* Re: New Version Notification for
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
> *Importance:* High
>
>
>
> Eric,
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> Thanks for your comments. I am reading your comments which was attached to
> your previous email.
>
> Since your previous comments were based on the word document not the draft
> itself, I will address them in the updated draft and send you the new one.
>
>
>
> Reza
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> *From: *Eric Gray <[e-mail]>
> *Date: *Wednesday, November 13, 2019 at 7:58 AM
> *To: *Reza Rokui <[e-mail]>, Kiran Makhijani <
> [e-mail]>, Shunsuke Homma <[e-mail]>,
> Jari Arkko <[e-mail]>, "[e-mail]" <
> [e-mail]>
> *Subject: *RE: New Version Notification for
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
>
>
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> Reza,
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>
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>               Is there any way that you could provide some description of
> how the comments were addressed, as opposed to the statement that they were?
>
>
>
> --
>
> Eric
>
>
>
> *From:* Teas-ns-dt <[e-mail]> *On Behalf Of *Rokui,
> Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)
> *Sent:* Sunday, November 3, 2019 10:21 AM
> *To:* Kiran Makhijani <[e-mail]>; Shunsuke Homma <
> [e-mail]>; Jari Arkko <[e-mail]>;
> [e-mail]
> *Cc:* Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <[e-mail]>
> *Subject:* [Teas-ns-dt] FW: New Version Notification for
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
>
>
>
> All,
>
>
>
> As per our discussion during the network slicing DT meeting on Oct 31, the
> first version of draft "*IETF Definition of Transport Slice"* has been
> submitted. Authors have incorporated the comments.
>
> Please review. Any other comments are welcome.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Reza
>
>
>
> On 2019-11-03, 10:13 AM, "[e-mail]" <
> [e-mail]> wrote:
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>     A new version of I-D, draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
>
>     has been successfully submitted by Reza Rokui and posted to the
>
>     IETF repository.
>
>
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>     Name:            draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition
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>     Revision:  00
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>     Title:           IETF Definition of Transport Slice
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>     Document date:    2019-11-02
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>     Group:           Individual Submission
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>     Pages:           15
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>     URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
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>     Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition/
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>     Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00
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>     Htmlized:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition
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>     Abstract:
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>        This document describes the definition of transport slice in IETF
> and
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>        considerations on implementation (realization) of transport slice.
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>        This work is part of work on TEAS WG network slicing Design Team.
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>     Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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>     The IETF Secretariat
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