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From: "Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)" <reza.rokui@nokia.com>
To: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>, Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com>, Shunsuke Homma <shunsuke.homma.fp@hco.ntt.co.jp>, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>, "teas-ns-dt@ietf.org" <teas-ns-dt@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Teas-ns-dt] New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
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Eric,

I also referred to the word document which was attached to your email. I have your emai.
I update the draft-00 and send it for review. I will also update the word and send it to you.

Reza



From: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>
Date: Wednesday, November 13, 2019 at 8:17 AM
To: Reza Rokui <reza.rokui@nokia.com>, Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com>, Shunsuke Homma <shunsuke.homma.fp@hco.ntt.co.jp>, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>, "teas-ns-dt@ietf.org" <teas-ns-dt@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

Reza,

The word document was what you had shared with us earlier, asking for comments.  Most of my comments are actually in the word document itself, with only the general comments in the E-Mail itself.

If you need me to forward the earlier E-Mail – so that you can see the comments in the Word document – please let me know.

By the way, perhaps you should not be in such a rush to produce a new version for everyone to review that you don’t actually get around to the comments from their last review.

--
Eric

From: Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <reza.rokui@nokia.com>
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To: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>; Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com>; Shunsuke Homma <shunsuke.homma.fp@hco.ntt.co.jp>; Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>; teas-ns-dt@ietf.org
Cc: Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <reza.rokui@nokia.com>
Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt
Importance: High

Eric,

Thanks for your comments. I am reading your comments which was attached to your previous email.
Since your previous comments were based on the word document not the draft itself, I will address them in the updated draft and send you the new one.

Reza




From: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com<mailto:eric.gray@ericsson.com>>
Date: Wednesday, November 13, 2019 at 7:58 AM
To: Reza Rokui <reza.rokui@nokia.com<mailto:reza.rokui@nokia.com>>, Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com<mailto:kiranm@futurewei.com>>, Shunsuke Homma <shunsuke.homma.fp@hco.ntt.co.jp<mailto:shunsuke.homma.fp@hco.ntt.co.jp>>, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com<mailto:jari.arkko@ericsson.com>>, "teas-ns-dt@ietf.org<mailto:teas-ns-dt@ietf.org>" <teas-ns-dt@ietf.org<mailto:teas-ns-dt@ietf.org>>
Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

Reza,

              Is there any way that you could provide some description of how the comments were addressed, as opposed to the statement that they were?

--
Eric

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Cc: Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <reza.rokui@nokia.com<mailto:reza.rokui@nokia.com>>
Subject: [Teas-ns-dt] FW: New Version Notification for draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt


All,



As per our discussion during the network slicing DT meeting on Oct 31, the first version of draft "IETF Definition of Transport Slice" has been submitted. Authors have incorporated the comments.

Please review. Any other comments are welcome.



Cheers,

Reza



On 2019-11-03, 10:13 AM, "internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>" <internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>> wrote:





    A new version of I-D, draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

    has been successfully submitted by Reza Rokui and posted to the

    IETF repository.



    Name:            draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition

    Revision:  00

    Title:           IETF Definition of Transport Slice

    Document date:    2019-11-02

    Group:           Individual Submission

    Pages:           15

    URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00.txt

    Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition/

    Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-00

    Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition





    Abstract:

       This document describes the definition of transport slice in IETF and

       considerations on implementation (realization) of transport slice.

       This work is part of work on TEAS WG network slicing Design Team.









    Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission

    until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.



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