Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10
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Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10
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Hi Pavan, all, I would suggest addressing the AC issue raised by Med, but other than that I believe the document is ready to move forward. If youre looking for implementation feedbacks, an EANTC interop event was run yesterday at the MPLS world congress (based on an earlier version of the draft). Cheers Daniele From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of mohamed.boucadair@orange.com Sent: Friday, April 12, 2024 5:24 PM To: TEAS WG (teas@ietf.org) <teas@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10 Hi all, Please find below my comments based on -10 (with appendix): * pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2024/draft-ietf -teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10-rev%20Med.pdf * Doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/2024/draft-ietf- teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10-rev%20Med.doc Most of the remaining comments are minor. The only major comment is that now that the AC specs are stable (WGLCed in opsawg), I suggest that we use the typedefs defined there for AC referencing and also reusing the rate-limit groupings defined their. Please note that because min-elements 2 is used under list sdp, example instances must always include sdp elements; otherwise the instance is invalid. Some of the examples are broken; I provided fixes when needed, but please double check on your side. Im not reiterating the comments about the appendix and the one forwarded from OPSAWG: * Appendix: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/W6yB9cnyNnRc4JR5j2Fsx0YmKfY/ * Mahesh comment: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/Xg5uZ8iOYiFZ2OS-wXuqmERnCqA/ The document is ready to move forward once these comments are addressed. Cheers, Med De : Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:teas-bounces@ietf.org> > De la part de Vishnu Pavan Beeram Envoyé : vendredi 12 avril 2024 10:38 À : TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org <mailto:teas@ietf.org> > Cc : TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org <mailto:teas-chairs@ietf.org> > Objet : [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10 All, This starts a two-week working group last call on https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang / The working group last call ends on April 26th 2024. Please send your comments to the working group mailing list. Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome! This is useful and important, even from authors. Note: There is IPR disclosed for this document - <https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-teas-ie tf-network-slice-nbi-yang> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-teas-iet f-network-slice-nbi-yang Thank you, Pavan, Lou and Oscar ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
- [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network… Vishnu Pavan Beeram
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… daniele.ietf
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… Wubo (lana)
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… Wubo (lana)
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… Wubo (lana)
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… Wubo (lana)
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… John Mullooly (jmullool)
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… Zafar Ali (zali)
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… Tarek Saad
- Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-net… Dhruv Dhody