Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10

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Hi all,

Please find below my comments based on -10 (with appendix):


  *   pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2024/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10-rev%20Med.pdf
  *   Doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/2024/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10-rev%20Med.doc

Most of the remaining comments are minor. The only major comment is that now that the AC specs are stable (WGLCed in opsawg), I suggest that we use the typedefs defined there for AC referencing and also reusing the rate-limit groupings defined their.

Please note that because "min-elements 2" is used under "list sdp", example instances must always include sdp elements; otherwise the instance is invalid. Some of the examples are broken; I provided fixes when needed, but please double check on your side.

I'm not reiterating the comments about the appendix and the one forwarded from OPSAWG:


  *   Appendix: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/W6yB9cnyNnRc4JR5j2Fsx0YmKfY/
  *   Mahesh comment: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/Xg5uZ8iOYiFZ2OS-wXuqmERnCqA/

The document is ready to move forward once these comments are addressed.

Cheers,
Med

De : Teas <[e-mail]> De la part de Vishnu Pavan Beeram
Envoyé : vendredi 12 avril 2024 10:38
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Objet : [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10

All,

This starts a two-week working group last call on
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang/

The working group last call ends on April 26th 2024.
Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

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Thank you,
Pavan, Lou and Oscar
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