[Teas] Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-26
Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 07 June 2024 06:58 UTC
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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 07 Jun 2024 07:58:14 +0100
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Subject: [Teas] Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-26
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Hi Shivan, On Fri, Jun 7, 2024 at 5:17 AM Shivan Sahib via Datatracker < noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Shivan Sahib > Review result: Ready > > I found the descriptions of sensitive data nodes in Security Considerations > useful. I'm sure they'll be helpful to implementers. > > nit: In Security Considerations, "Therefore, many security risks such as > malicious attack and rogue elements attempting to connect to various ACTN > components." is incomplete. > > Dhruv: Ack, updated. > nit: in Introduction, "Abstraction and Control of Traffic Engineered > Networks > (ACTN) describes a set of management and control functions used to operate > one > or more TE networks to construct Virtual Network (VN) that can be > represented > to customers and that are built from abstractions of the underlying TE > networks > [RFC8453]" reads awkwardly. Also "TE" is not defined before being used > (it's > defined in the reference). > > Dhruv: Ack, updated. Diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-26&url2=draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-27&difftype=--html Thanks! Dhruv
- [Teas] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-teas… Shivan Sahib via Datatracker
- [Teas] Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-… Dhruv Dhody