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Subject: [Teas] New version of draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing (Was RE: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-05)
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G’day TEAS, 

 

The authors of the I-D just posted a new version to address all the Last Call reviews and comments:

 

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-06

 

Changes include:

 

- Underlining the use of IETF technologies for network slice, service, and controller. 

- Swapping references from WG drafts to recently published RFCs (9522 and 9543).

- Highlighting the relationship between YANG modes and new work on mapping network slice services to TE models. 

- Moved relevant references from Informative to Normative.

- Squashed various NITS and broken grammar.

 

Thanks to all the WG Last Call reviewers, especially Med (for text), Choade, Sergio, Daniele, John and Adrian (for detailed comments).

 

BR, Dan – on behalf of the authors/contributors. 

 

From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Vishnu Pavan Beeram
Sent: Monday, March 11, 2024 2:27 AM
To: TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-05

 

The WG LC is closed.

Authors,

Please resolve the comments received during LC (both on and
off-list) and then post an updated revision (after the current 

submission block is lifted).  Once posted, please summarize 

the changes on the list.

 

Regards,

- Pavan (on behalf of the TEAS WG chairs)

 

On Sat, Feb 17, 2024 at 11:06 PM Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com <mailto:vishnupavan@gmail.com> > wrote:

All,

This starts a two-week working group last call on

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing/


 

The working group last call ends on March 2nd 2024.

Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

Thank you,
Pavan, Lou and Oscar

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