Re: [TICTOC] Comments on the proposed 1599v2 YANG model

Jiangyuanlong <jiangyuanlong@huawei.com> Mon, 07 November 2016 03:14 UTC

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From: Jiangyuanlong <jiangyuanlong@huawei.com>
To: Joseph Gwinn <joegwinn@comcast.net>, "tictoc@ietf.org" <tictoc@ietf.org>
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Hi Joe,

Thank you a lot for the thorough review. To resolve your comments, we will post an updated version after IETF 97 (when the submission of drafts is re-opened).

Cheers,
Yuanlong

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From: TICTOC [mailto:tictoc-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Joseph Gwinn
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Subject: [TICTOC] Comments on the proposed 1599v2 YANG model

To the TICTOC working group:

Attached find my redlines against draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-00 dated 20 October 2016.

Where the arrows point should be text highlighted in yellow, but the yellow may be faint in some readers.

Joe Gwinn