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[TICTOC] Comments on the proposed 1599v2 YANG model

Joseph Gwinn <joegwinn@comcast.net> Sat, 05 November 2016 20:54 UTC

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Date: Sat, 05 Nov 2016 16:54:00 -0400
From: Joseph Gwinn <joegwinn@comcast.net>
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Subject: [TICTOC] Comments on the proposed 1599v2 YANG model
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To the TICTOC working group:

Attached find my redlines against draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-00 
dated 20 October 2016.

Where the arrows point should be text highlighted in yellow, but the 
yellow may be faint in some readers.

Joe Gwinn

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