[TLS] Éric Vyncke's Yes on draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: (with COMMENT)

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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Special thanks to the shepherd, Sean Turner, who did a great job to describe
the WG consensus. Rob Wilton's point about minimum version is also important
and should be addressed in the abstract (even if the text is clearer in section
1).

Please find below some nits.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

-- Abstract --
"This document, if approved, formally deprecates Transport Layer" => should ",
if approved," be removed now from the abstract? The RFC Editor will probably do
it though.

-- Section 1 --
"deprecate these old versions." should the "these old version" be followed by
the enumeration ?