Re: [trill] Mail Shepherd's comments on draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm-03.txt

[Donald Eastlake <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

On Thu, Jun 19, 2014 at 4:49 AM, Liyizhou <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Hi Tissa,
>
> “ Upstream RBridge nickname” which occurred twice in 8.4.8 & 10.1.2 respectively should be “Previous RBridge nickname” in the document.

I agree. It is not that "upstream RBridge" is wrong but the official
name is "Previous RBridge nickname TLV" so, at the beginning of the
2nd paragraph in 8.4.8, the first word should be "Previous". And in
10.1.2, in the list of TLVs to include, the first one should be
"Previous ..." rather than "Upstream ...".

I also just noticed a really trivial glitch: the section numbers and
headings for 1., 2., 10., 10.1., 10.1.1., 10.1.2., 16.2., and 17. are
not flush-left, that is, they have a space before them (except for
16.2. which looks like it has two leading spaces) . You can see this
most easily in the htmlized view at
tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm. Normally section headings
are bold face and if you click on the section number in the Table of
Contents, you go to that section. But for these sections, the section
number heading is not bold face and if you click on the section number
in the ToC, it does not go to that Section, so the htmlizing process
has not fully recognized them as headings.

The only other nit I am aware of is that there is one occurrence of
"[RF7180]" that should be "[RFC7180]". These are all so minor I'm not
sure if it warrants posting a new version...

Thanks,
Donald
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> Yizhou