Re: [tsvwg] Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-32

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Date: Thu, 04 Apr 2024 14:34:02 -0700
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Hi, all,

Thanks Martin for the detailed review. I’m hoping we can split it out so the thread of each piece can be tracked in Github, so I’ll wait for that before responding further.

On the point below, can you (both) help me understand the error you see?

It is intended to be clarified as:

	"NOPs are not reported to the user, [regardless of] whether [they are] used [i.e., part of the options that appear] per-datagram or per-fragment ([the latter] as defined in Section 11.4).”

Joe

> On Apr 4, 2024, at 2:22 PM, C. M. Heard <heard@pobox.com> wrote: 
>> (11.6) "NOPs are not reported to the user, whether used per-datagram or per-fragment (as defined in Section 11.4)."
>> 
>> I think this is a cut-and-paste error.
> 
> Agreed.