Re: [tsvwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8085 (7106)

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Wed, 31 August 2022 09:54 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8085 (7106)
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Hi,

IMO this errata is correct and should be verified.

Additionally, the reference in the "Informative References" section should also be changed, per the notes.

Thanks,
Lars

On 2022-8-31, at 12:46, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
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> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8085,
> "UDP Usage Guidelines".
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> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7106
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> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Adam Wall <adam.w@sasktel.net>
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> Section: 3.4
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> Original Text
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> More description of the set of checks performed using the checksum field is provided in Section 3.1 of [RFC6396].
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> Corrected Text
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> More description of the set of checks performed using the checksum field is provided in Section 3.1 of [RFC6936].
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> Notes
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> The wrong RFC was referenced under "Checksum Guidelines" Section 3.4, including the same wrong RFC information within the "Informative References" Section 8.2.
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> RFC8085 (draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-19)
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> Title               : UDP Usage Guidelines
> Publication Date    : March 2017
> Author(s)           : L. Eggert, G. Fairhurst, G. Shepherd
> Category            : BEST CURRENT PRACTICE
> Source              : Transport Area Working Group
> Area                : Transport
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG