Re: [tsvwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8085 (7106)

Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> Thu, 22 September 2022 17:48 UTC

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Date: Thu, 22 Sep 2022 10:47:15 -0700
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8085 (7106)
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thank you to the commenters, i've verified it.

On Wed, Aug 31, 2022 at 6:20 AM Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>
wrote:

> I agree, this reference needs to be corrected.
>
> best wishes,
> Gorry
>
> On 31/08/2022 10:54, Lars Eggert wrote:
> > Hi,
> >
> > IMO this errata is correct and should be verified.
> >
> > Additionally, the reference in the "Informative References" section
> should also be changed, per the notes.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Lars
> >
> > On 2022-8-31, at 12:46, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> wrote:
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> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8085,
> >> "UDP Usage Guidelines".
> >>
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> You may review the report below and at:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7106
> >>
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> Type: Editorial
> >> Reported by: Adam Wall <adam.w@sasktel.net>
> >>
> >> Section: 3.4
> >>
> >> Original Text
> >> -------------
> >> More description of the set of checks performed using the checksum
> field is provided in Section 3.1 of [RFC6396].
> >>
> >> Corrected Text
> >> --------------
> >> More description of the set of checks performed using the checksum
> field is provided in Section 3.1 of [RFC6936].
> >>
> >> Notes
> >> -----
> >> The wrong RFC was referenced under "Checksum Guidelines" Section 3.4,
> including the same wrong RFC information within the "Informative
> References" Section 8.2.
> >>
> >> Instructions:
> >> -------------
> >> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> >> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> >> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
> >> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> >>
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> RFC8085 (draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-19)
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> Title               : UDP Usage Guidelines
> >> Publication Date    : March 2017
> >> Author(s)           : L. Eggert, G. Fairhurst, G. Shepherd
> >> Category            : BEST CURRENT PRACTICE
> >> Source              : Transport Area Working Group
> >> Area                : Transport
> >> Stream              : IETF
> >> Verifying Party     : IESG
>
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